All Comments on 'Now Starring Ch. 07'

Very dark twist but very good. David has some issues doesn't he?

I have been waiting for months for this chapter and I am happy to see it. Just to let u know I have nothing against Elise but I want David to go back to John...I realise he has lots of issues to work out but ...John is the one for him.

I love ur work

This came out while I was away and I missed it but I'm glad I checked back. Now I'm not sure who has the greater issues, David or his dad, poor lamb. I love this little glimpse into David's head at last though and can't wait to see how he copes with his time back home.

David has some deep dark issues and this house does not seem like a healthy place for him. His dad’s abuse is unforgivable. And I hated that David is considering calling Elisse - one day and he’s tempted to flirt and stray - I’m sorry that is not a real love with John. If he cheats, this story will jump the tracks.