All Comments on 'Now Starring Ch. 09'

That Elisa girl has some nerve. I don't like her at all. She has no idea what kind of relationship those two have. It is so obvious that she is star struck with David because he is a television star. I'm sure if she saw her man kissing up on somebody else then she wouldn't hesitate slapping him or something, but all she ever talks about is how her niece is so impressed and that they were in the paper and hoping she didn't get him in trouble. Yeah right, like she gives a damn. She is so fake! She is only being nice because she wants to date a celebrity. POOR JOHN. He needs to walk away, but unfortunately, he truely loves the son of bitch. I really hope David chooses to be with John, despite his family, mainly his father. He's a grown ass man and he needs to act like one.

KEEP UP THE INCREDIBLE WRITING. I always like writing that makes me feel for the character, which makes it good. Please hurry with the next chapter.

Getting more and more interesting, I feel like a junkie waiting for your next installment.

It's becoming plain that David has absolutely no idea what he wants, so his mind is going to have to be made up for him. I'm beginning to feel rather sorry for John now. How your story twists and turns.

More please!! xx

“If you love me as much as you say you do, you will give me this time.” How can David even expect John to agree to this when David has proven to John that this is not just time apart to get his head straight and figure things out. David has all but said he will continue things with Elisse and likely fuck her. How is this being even considered as ok? John should literally beat the shit out of David until he realizes he’s being a selfish, disrespectful, heartless asshole and is literally treating John as a fucktoy and like a piece of shit. John should take his gay handsome self back to London and find some smoking hot gay guy who has his head on right and appreciates him - leave David to figure out his messed up life.