All Comments on 'NSFW Ch. 01: Not Safe for Wife?!'

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HaydenDLinder about 6 years ago

I'm just not sure.

OK, so I gave this one 4 stars, It's very well written but the story just comes across a little odd. I think you may have ended this issue just a page or two short. It's not a bad piece by any means it just doesn't have that 5 star "Ooo I gotta read it again!!" quality that some of your other stories have.

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