by sirhugs
Your submission has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the AH.
Good one!
Gang Bang stories are my favourite and out of the hundreds i've read that takes the cake. Very descriptive your words painted the picture so clearly i felt i was there watching. I also liked the way you kept the honeymooners intouch throughout the story whether by touch or eye contact. Great stuff. I'm still rock hard.
WOW...This one was WOW and Double WOW!!!
I am soooo glad no one else planted seed inside Gaby's vagina but Seth!!!
And now a romantic dinner for two in their room ...CAN'T WAIT!!!!
Non stop ... Repetitive. Nothing new here....
This kind of run on story,way too much description, ruined a good start.