All Comments on 'Nude Beach Bride Ch. 07'

by sirhugs

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janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Naturally...

Your submission has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the AH.

Good one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
sensational

Gang Bang stories are my favourite and out of the hundreds i've read that takes the cake. Very descriptive your words painted the picture so clearly i felt i was there watching. I also liked the way you kept the honeymooners intouch throughout the story whether by touch or eye contact. Great stuff. I'm still rock hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

WOW...This one was WOW and Double WOW!!!

I am soooo glad no one else planted seed inside Gaby's vagina but Seth!!!

And now a romantic dinner for two in their room ...CAN'T WAIT!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Boring..

Non stop ... Repetitive. Nothing new here....

This kind of run on story,way too much description, ruined a good start.

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