All Comments on 'Nude Beach Horror'

Difficult to swallow, orally? -I imagine not Sir! BMW ownership can overcome physical inadequacy for various reasons, most women are aware of. Shaving all pubic hair off is only the first step to solving this male writer's problem in life. BTW:Few women would humiliate a potential male lover with such a tiny appendage, checking for suitability in more practical areas? Measure up your tongue Sir, then practice on flexibility, is second logical step. IE: God given attributes are very rarely restricted to a penis size, viewed by female readers! Providing wealth plus oral satisfaction to ladies. You can be proud, showing up stark naked with fully shaven pubes at a public beach anywhere at all! EG: Just lick both eyebrows, then watch the young naked beachgoers [of both sexes] eyes light up with envy, IE: Ladies attention will be focussed elsewhere, watching seductive movements above neck level.

Really well written stuff. The only part I'm not crazy about is the ending, I'd rather he got the pity fuck instead of just the handjob. Still great though.

I did love this story, the only thing I'd think of adding is a little cross dressing...since he's a "little guy" he should be made to wear panties!

Not a bad read... Although, there's almost no realism to some of the attributes of his "tiny" problem. A small one could theoretically get up and stay up for a very good while since it takes very little amounts of bloodflow, it's easier to "maintain".

On another note: Holly's character completely changed throughout the story, it seemed... One minute she's a sympathetic friend to him and the next she intentionally crushes his feelings??? In a period of just a few hours? The laughter is all fine and dandy (it seemed reasonable to an extent) but saying you feel bad, standing up for him, and then completely crushing the little bit of hope he had left? None of that makes any sense at all (to me).

Like I said though, not a bad read. I'd say 3 stars.

Got me rock hard, and kept me that way. I hope my little secret is never exposed like this ;) Write more stories uppishcarrot :)

It was wonderful. I have a 3.5" hard cock, I want to be dominated by a female or male. I shave my cock and try to show it off. I have been laughed at many times.

My god...so cruel. Treating ppl like that is how some ppl get shot. Those girls deserve to be crucified, humiliated, caused equal hurt.

story sucks

I agree, it's a total unrealistic scenario...but hell, this is all about fiction, so why complaining?

I for my part liked the story. My favourite scene was the humiliating remarks from the crowd like

"Where's your stout faggot?!" and "Fuuuck! Poor dude! He's got no fucking dick!!"

such a turn-on!

Fred here. It really is huge. Eleven inches long and over eight in circumference.

Rather nasty really!