All Comments on 'Nude Dancing # 02: Mom'

Scouries,you are gettig more lewd by the second[I am pleased to say]

thanks for writing these kind of stories.good luck.

There are many that envy you Scouries,and also lots of other authors on this site,both male and female.You just keep on I love your approach

This was a wonderful story and I hope that you will continue it.

Milt

There are no words to express just how much I love and adore your writing. Fucking FABULOUS!!!! You are one of the few who keep me coming back to this site for more. Bravo you've done it once again. I sit on the edge of my seat anticipating your next entry. Give me more!!!! As long as you keep writing like this you will remain in high demand. Smooches!! Theprncss0905

Keep the stories coming i couldn't stop reading once i started Thanks.One Great writer of sexy stories.

<p>This story has been done before in forms some similar and some almost identical to this storyline. The best one in my opinion was a trilogy by briadams entitled 'The Day Our Lives Started'</p>

<p>By comparison I thought this story lacked 'heart' and was flat.</p>

SPiffy good job and nice take on the scenario. Keep it up....er...the writing I mean.

Ciao

Well Jim, another great story! Thanks to you and a few other excellent writers, I am learning to be more open minded about incest and to enjoy the genre more and more. I was hoping for a few more chapters, but who knows, the great Scouries may resurrect this delicious family some time in the future! Bravo! Pete.

Okay I'm absolutely in love with this story. I can't get enough. When I saw the new chapter was out I felt like a kit at the candy story. I can't wait for more chapters.

Another masterpiece (with the emphasis on piece) from the king of incestuous literature. Scouries should be awarded another Piece Prize.

that's how real the characters have in this story. this may as well be about love dolls fucking, it owuld read the same. switch the names and you couldn't tell the difference between mom and sis in the endless bump and grind. this is nothing but a long fuck scene with people you can't tell apart. the 50% is generous for something done better hundreds of times before.

The creativity of your story is amazing. I would read many more chapters of this--I'm addicted.

I'm loving this story. I had been checking every day to see if a new chapter was up. Please write more. A LOT more!:D

Wow! Amazing! Best story ever! Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks!

more please and soon!!

Definitely write more chapters. I am absolutely loving the story.

You have to continue this. It's rare I find a series that I enjoy so much! I look forward to every chapter you write!

Alway,s a good read,do not know how you do it.

Just when you think you are getting to the best part it's a cliff hanger. Love the story. I want as many chapters as you want to write. But please don't leave us on pins and needles.

You are obviously still on your game. BTW them terrorists you are writin' about better be a bunch of fuckers.

Oh yes, there was sex too.

VERY NICE JOB, ONE OF THE BEST WRITTEN STORIES I HAVE READ ON THIS SITE, DONE WITH A LOT OF CLASS.

Skip the terrorists. You will loose your readers for sure.

Your quality is hard to find. I voted to encourage you on like the others that left notes.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE - follow up on this series - it is just starting to get really good - maybe babies for both women etc - Jena121

that kept me going rite to the end ......

That one was the best! Off the scale man :D

I really like all of your stories. You are an incest expert and I wish I could vote you a ten istead of just five.

Keep up the good work.

Grassman

Would appreciate it if you could write part 3 for this wonderful story when you have the time.

Great Story. You need to make a 3rd chapter for it though and explore the relationships when they are at college. You write as if from experience. I wonder.....

Just discovered your treasure trove of stories and look forward to many more hours of enjoyment.

4-l8-08

As a published author, a man of nearly 70 years, nearly 40 of them as a Swinger (married & single), I want to congratulate you. You've written a breath of fresh air in this genre. PLEASE keep up the good work. Work like yours may lead this society of ours out of the "dark ages" of publicly acknowledging we are creatures with a need to express our natural sexuality.

Thank you.

Duke Knox

rdkusnretyahoo.com

This is very lewd Scouries,in fact you are a very lewd person,but then so am I ,well done .

I'm crying.

Your story had some great ideas, but the sex scenes were rushed way too fast. Then when the sister came home, you had an opportunity to really delve deep into that. Even if you rushed it strait into a sex scene, you could have spent a full page or two on the action. Instead, that whole part of the relationship is treated like an afterthought. You had some great ideas, but I've got to mark you down a bit for execution. Hope you pick this storyline up again though. Still some great potential with this story.

the 2nd part was a little rushed but just another outstanding story. Please keep them coming.

This fine story from a recognized master centers on the hero's big prick! It's his best asset, both professionally and personally. And Bobby-boy loves to show it off, to the screaming women who watch his dance act, to his loving sister, and most all of all to his own mother! Mom catches him naked at the start, Bobby often has the urge to just drop his jeans and lose his boxers or zip down and haul it out for to let his mother see that her little boy is all grown up--and then some! Mom catches his nude dance act, and now nothing can stop her from spreading her legs and welcoming her boy's big stiff dick up the same cunt he came out of! She's can't wait, she's DESPERATE for it! Bobby has been pronging his sister for a while, but like any son will eventually admit, nothing beats shoving your hard cock up the warm ever-loving motherly twat--nothing! Bobby-boy plows his Mom like the strong aggressive motherfucker he is, finally emptying his big balls to proudly fuck a baby up his mother's fertile cunt!

......Another of your Great stories mr. Scouries.....

I was crusing along fine until you got to the erotic couplilng parts - and then - at certain parts, my lower, pelvic region literally jerked in response to your words. This was very hot reading for me, now please excuse me while I cool off! Thanks for a very hot story.....

Really enjoyed this - nice slow build up to the point where Bobby fucks his mother, in between fucking his sisters' brains out of course! When he eventually fucks his mum it's hot - she's one horny milf and she needs lots of cock, even she admitted she had only fucked 10 times or so in the last so many years. I'm glad her son was able to make her realise what she was missing and needing. Very horny.

A great tale it got me turned on,I am thinking of getting my two younger sisters to play with my penis while i stroke there wonderful pussys,My father is going away for two weeks soon so i will also be fucking my mother aswell if i am successful i will let you know

i read everything you write. even if its not exactly what im into. i just enjoy your writing style. keep up the good work.

Your story was, no, is fantastic and makes me recall some of my erotic moments. Dancing naked in a club is a total turn-on and I partake fairly frequently. Amsterdam is my favorite place to dance and not infrequently my cock is engulfed on the dance floor by avid girls. Not only by their mouiths as they suck me off but by their juicy vaginas and sometimes ecen a butt. Get paid for it? No, just free entrance to the clubs

too bad you did not go in more detail about the 3 of them together and how they moved to Miami and the babies they had and the sucking of the milk from mothers milk he devoured. this is a great storie Mr. Scouries

This story was a really good one. It would have been better if you wrote more about all 3 of them living together, and the women have children with him. Maybe in the next chapter?

5***** toby9790.

JIm,

You the best author in here,I have read all your work,more than once,keep it up.

Sunny boy

of all the stories i've read here this is the best. good job. hope u continue with this.

I don't know. The first part was great with Natalie. Add in mom, and I just don't know. They are both good in their own ways. Nicely done.

I thought it started just a little slow but it picked up quickly and went really well. I always enjoy your stories, this is one that I don't remember reading before. Thank you for writing.

Great story Jim, 5*s. Does it make a difference coming from a Labour Party supporter?

That was beautiful

I like the factt that mommy wants your baby. Your sister too! I made love to both my sister and mother for about 10 years. We had 8 children - 4 from each lover.

another great loving story. i don't know how you keep doing it story after story but i'm glad that you do. you are the best writer. bob w.

Another great story!

Please get well soon. I'm running out of your stories.

The author obviously forgot to include RAPE to the 'Tags For This Story'. That's what the definition is when you force yourself upon someone who says "NO".

A quick cursory glance at some of this particular authors other works tells me there's something really sinister about him. Creep.

I loved both of these stories. Some people need to lighten up and realize this erotic story telling. Not factual events. Keep them coming

A 2, seems you try to make to appear to be a love story (only thing that saved it from a 1) but the guy is really just a hedonistic rapist.

encompasses incest with mother and daughter in a light that almost makes it believable as a love story .

Another great story, thank you

One of THE best on this site! A truly great story!

This pair of stories will certainly be re read many times. It will be one of my favorite "keepers".

Please grace us with more of your work

I have to say this is one of your best. Great work. Thank you. Tom

I voted a 5, You've got talent!

It is another "keeper" that i am adding to my "reread" stash. As i commented in my last E Mail (supposedly direct to you) You are one of my very favorite authors and the waiting for the next story is sometimes very difficult.

Please continue to grace us with more of the same in the the near and far future. Are you a "Buckeye"??

flints1313

enjoyed both first and second nude dancing. don't stop now keep writing. Is there babies in the future for sis and mom?

Loved the idea of the dancing, Robin and everything,lol.

as always the best author so far on this site

Jim, Thank you so much, I must have cum as many times as the three of them

Love Carmella xxx

Oh, dear - what wobbly knees when I tried to get up after reading this story !! :-D

.....ONE Jim Scouries !!

I hope that you are Happy & doing well in your Life.

Thank you so much for writing really great stories - keep going Jim ?

this one lie most of your stories cries for another chapter or two

Awesome story awesome job

Very nice..well written and no over the top cockamamie shit that didn't make any sense. Great job and thank you..5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I thought it was a great story. I'm looking forward to another chapter!!

Glad mom got knocked hope did to your sister too

End up threesome with mom and sister had my aunt come over saw us three nude mom told sister her and my sister pregnant mom told her your next she said hell I am grabbed my aunt spun her around pulled her tube top down told mom she got dark brown nipples sister sat on her face held arms pulled her shorts underwear off raised her legs plowed into her hairy cunt fuck her screaming then unloas in her let her go yelled at us not even protected mim said good you just became part of his family mom said go get your clothes moving in then lom told her we are having swingers party be only black doing us three woman bareback

To be continued....PLEASE.

Good story of passion, love, and lust that makes you almost forget about the incest - until you start to project into the future and the "happily ever after". Again, I appreciate that both mom and Nat ask, in fact demand, that Bobby, put it in and "fuck" them rather than Bobby taking them against their will. Like that there's not lots of ridiculous, graphic, gutter-variety vulgarity during the sex scenes. This could easily be a "romance-porn" video for couples.

Fantastic, So beautifully written just wish there had been more

This is a great story, very exciting and erotic! My only complaint is the final scene felt rushed. It could have had more detail as to what the 3 of them did together. Even so, it is a 5 star story!

It's really good thank you.

So hot, love it

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

I am a little leary about the guy doing his sister and then his mother. Pick one and stay with that.

A great story and well written.

Great story. I only wish you had been inspired to write an second story. Two wives, several incest children, daughter develop a hunger for daddy. How could mom and sis object? Oh the delightful sin.

Nicely drawn-out story: would like to see more filling (trials and tribulations) to the hint that Bobby and Natalie would be going to the same school and living together, as well as the hint that Mum would be Bobby's second wife and would possibly be living with them both (more trial and tribulations). Would Bobby continue to strip to support the family if Mum did have Bobby's child, and would Natalie get pregnant as well; did they all live happily ever after? Feels incomplete just as it is!