by alexxxis
This story is as fun to read as a "Janet Evanovich" novel! How do you write such cool and fun erotica? What a torture it is for the reader to have to finish one paragraph before starting another! Thank you for sharing your writing skills with us!
You have so much literary talent... and omg... so hot! Paul
You are one of the most natural and entertaining writers on this site. An endless supply of sexual adjectives makes me want to keep reading just to see what you'll come up with next. Don't stop the series, it's just getting interesting! Great job!
Those 2 stories are as entertaining as any I have ever read on this site. Your irreverence about the movies to which you refer is as hilarious as the asides. Didi I mention that everything is skillfully brought to a boil? If this ever comes to Jay's attention, I'm sure that she will be happy to have such a sensitive fan -- I agree with your assessment of unlucky in love -- shouldn't the "media" allow celebrities a private personal life? At any rate, I'm going to spent the weekend reading all the rest of your work. Truly enjoyable!
MrMudd22
MrMudd@rcn.com
Great job again! You are an extremly fun exciting writer!
damn, I do love your spirit and sense of fun. hard not to fall in love with the writer with those wonderful asides. I knew when I read your Author's note, that this would be a fun and wonderful romp. Keep up the great writing Alexxxis,and shower us with more of your self deprecating humor. I can't wait for more offerings.
experience that you had, or if not, that it was a really explicit dream. I love your first person accounts of your erotic adventures; you have a great way with word images. They make this old guy get a woody that rivals the ones you describe. Thanks.