All Comments on 'Nudist Family Holiday Ch. 04'

Good stuff. Hopefully Kevin's mom and her big tits feature in the next chapter.

Not too long and not too short, with plenty of action. Time to get Mom in on the fun!

I just want to start by saying WOW! What a great chapter! And I'm glad to hear that you'll be working on the Mother's helping hand next chapter. Hopefully we'll get more of this story soon too! Also maybe longer chapters? Nevertheless...amazing! Now, just to ask others and maybe yourself Dick Spanker, does anyone have any other favourite stories/series that have a similar tone or writing style to these 2 series? I really like Aunt Sandi if anyone has read it, but I'm looking for more, so I can read in between instalments of these series! If anyone has any suggestions please let me know!

great story though it's a bit weird the change of heart of the sister. Also, in this chapter, we don't have a single thing on the horniness of the sister, i think it could be a better story with this point of view.

I'm enjoying it and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Things are really moving now that Beth is opening up and embracing her sexuality. I rather like the girls vs the boys theme going here. But, it's all good. Everyone wins in the end....

I can't wait for the next installment.

Hope, eventually the mom and the daughter/ sisters's pussies will be eaten too.

You kind of need to be prepared to wait and wait. Dick_Spanker has a reputation for long gaps of time between each installment.

Don't think this story will continue until MHH is completed. No word from Dick_Spanker as to when that will happen but he's been known to go from three to six months before resurfacing with a new chapter. So, try not to be impatient.

Too many great stories out there to keep checking in to see if there's a new episode. I'm moving on.

Try Mother's Helping Hand. That one has 23 chapters.

love your stories cant wait for more.

How about finishing one story before moving on to another. Will you leave this one unfinished as well?

Really enjoyed this story so far. There is so much potential and by the sounds of it the next chapter is going to be amazing once the mom/son action starts.

Really looking forward to the mother son stuff. It's good to learn that Kevin has such giant loads as we approach her oral demonstration that was hinted at.

Either story, when is next. Fucking awesome writing

Don't think we will get a new chapter here until Dick_Spanker finishes up with Mother's Helping Hand. But the good news is the final chapter of Mother's Helping Hand is supposed to drop very soon. I love Bobby and Alison but I can't wait to see what happens in Nudist Family Holiday Ch. 05. I think this story might even be greater than Mother's Helping Hand.

I am so happy that Kevin got to be the first person whose cum Beth swallowed :)

This is a really great chapter! I don't think Dick_Spanker gets enough credit for one of his great strengths as a Literoticist. Some people talk about his "reluctance" angle. I guess it's there but any reluctance usually crumbles with a hand wave. I've heard humor is one of his strengths. And, it's there too. No doubt about it. But, the thing is Dick_Spanker can really write a sex scene. All that swelling and throbbing and pulsing and tensing ..... Dick_Spanker makes it happen.

No new chapter. No nothing. Story went no where.

The story is over? I thought it was just getting started?

epic'ly great, hope it does continue and soon. The sausage and egg reference remind me of the dick in the hotdog scenes in adult vids. though still a worth story and hope your continuing

Hopefully with some openly public "oral training" :)

Great story so far. Logical. Not too short or too long. I really do hope you continue this story and finish it to conclusion! I figure at least two or three more chapters.

LOVE this story and am anxious for the next chapter(s)!

...it's been months since the last chapter and Dickspanker seems to be MIA, with not even an update to keep us informed of what's happening.

excellent story ! more please. it's time kevin fucked mom. many thanks.

We want to see where this goes...so many options! *S*

DS got a lot of back lash for the last chapter in his other story, but I can't see that being why he just up and left...leads me to wonder if something happened to him, for all we know he could have passed away or any number of things could have happened. It's been months and I was really loving where this story was headed and loved the different characters (huge fan of Mothers Helping Hand). Maybe one day he'll return, maybe not.

This is one of the best storie starts i ever read on this site. Every now and then i come back and hope that it suddently got finished. Especially the last two chappters were superb and it would be so nice to read how the things work out between Beth and her Father. Where are you Dick_spanker? We need a this story to continue! Or is somebody so creativ and can finish the story for him? But it had to be somebody really talented... But of course if d_s would come back that would be best...

Although it's been nearly 7 months since this chapter appeared, I do hope more appear in due course.

Please !

Unless some other talented writer steps in to continue this story, it is as dead as Mother's Helping Hand . . . which is a damned shame. This story was really shaping up as MHH was winding down. I hate that it's over. Even if somebody else took over, it wouldn't be the same without Dick Spanker. I don't know why he left. He had a lot of fans. But, it's probably time to start shopping for a new Favorite Author bacause I don't think DS is coming back.

I can understand the desire to have this story continue but I don't think anyone other than Dick Spanker can really do it. It's tough to find an author that pushes just the right buttons in your brain to make the story agree with you. It's clear that DS pushed enough buttons with quite a few folks on here to add up to a pretty ethusiastic following. I don't think a substitute author could do that. Now, I don't believe Dick Spanker is coming back, either. I don't even think he even reads the comments or checks on his likes anymore. But, that is a real tragedy because the story can't continue without Dick Spanker. I wish he would come back but I don't think he will.

Chapter 5 please ......

We need more chapters of this and mother's helping hand

Come on dude! It's been 9 months since you added to the story. Leaving your readers hanging is not cool!!

Where are you, Dick_Spanker ? You have some unfinished business here.

Please give us another chapter or two or three!!!

Well I take it you are 14.... the word is come!

Maybe mister spanker has been using his hands to much and has ejaculated any brain cells he had.

I think you mean "too," bro. If 'cum" for "come" is such a deal breaker for you, maybe a stroke site is not the best fit. And, anyway, Dick Spanker is gone. Today marks the year anniversary of his last appearance on Literotica.

I have been looking forward to the next chapter in this series for a year. I hope you haven’t forgotten about it

Plz

I love the series but seeing as it's been over a year and a half since the last chapter, I don't think that we'll see how it turns out. Too bad as it have gotten really hot!

last chapter was really hot - it took a while to warm up, but it did. wish there was another chapter or 2 - see how the family ended up!

Comment genius gives us somthing to read

Can not think how it will unfolded ?

I’m sure you can get 28 chapters out of this story too. Please don’t leave us hanging!!!

We're coming up on this chapter's two year anniversary in a few days. PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE give us an update! I love this story to bits and pieces so far and I really want it to continue!

You just finished your other series today. How about some new chapters with this one now. Two years is a long time to keep dad from cumming. Give him a break already!!

This story is at the beginning and has a lot to tell

Surprises us

Dad must have a load equal to or greater than Lake Erie, just waitiNg to erupt. Don't keep him in misery, or us either... More P-L-E-A-S-E ?

Don't be mean, we want more.

Awsome stories keep it up.

This is by far the best sex story i have read, dissapointed to find out that have havent made on for this seires in 2 years. Please finish this series. It is amazing.

This is a great story. It is building up nicely, a connevtion between father and daughter a connection between brother and sister,what is missing is a connection between mother and son. Oral sex is just the beginning, but surely the inevitable has to take place.

Great story and it will be a waste to let it incomplete.

Yes, please start writing again.

It was fun for you.

Thanks

I liked the way you paced your story in two page sections, it gave me a chance to catch my breath and settle back down before the next part of the story. I hope you continue on soon, I know Kevin's mom is looking forward to it.

It's been three years, why the hell have you not continued this story?

This is such a great story! Please try and finish. There is so much great sex that this family needs to experience. Family nudism is so great. Family sex is even better. More please

Please

Just adding to the chorus of voices asking you to continue this spicy story. It's excellent!

What a shame the author discontinued this superb story. So many hot scenarios are still out there waiting to be woven into the rich nudist landscape this talented author created.

OMG I need more, don't leave me hanging! Great story with wonderful timing.

Please carry on...... Pleeeeeese

awesome and funny. Part 5

Awesome build-up. Waiting for the rest of the chapters. I'm sure there will be at least another 5-6 more in this series if not 25 like in Mother's Helping Hand

Damn this is very hot. I just hope that there is more! A little fucking in their future I hope. Please let me know. Lapper69@hotmail.com

Next please

You write the best stories. I hope you write more in the future.

*****One HOT AZZ series could have used about 4 more chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Things sure got better once Beth got over her bitter cuntitude.

The story is building up nicely. Don't let go of it. Please take it to its conclusion. There could be atleast 8-10 chapters more. There's 2 weeks of vacation to be covered and then what happens when they get back home.

Oh NO, no more chapters ready to read.

It's a long shot, but will there be more chapters?

If you are still on there, DS, please continue this story. Your pace was exceptional (something I've seen and personally found as being very difficult to do in erotica) and there's so much more to see from Beth and her family.

If I may make a suggestion, I think there needs to be more inner turmoil from Beth. She started out being so contrary to Kevin and now the barriers are all gone. What is going on in her mind that makes her go from prudish to slut?

As for Kevin, does he get his comeuppance?