All Comments on 'Nun at the Wedding'

Loved every bit of it. Great story.

Even the title gives away that she's going to fuck.

Right from the second paragraph, I knew it was going to be another story with no basis of structure.

You should have built up her guilt, not given away her desires so early on. It leaves the reader no room for imagination.

Disappointing, though I expected it to be. I only read it because I'd seen the other comment in the portal. Don't know why I bothered.

It made my pussy ache so I would say it was pretty good. I would like to read more of your writings. Thanks

This story was mediocre at best. The charachters are extremely one-dimensional and it's very rushed. There just isn't enough here to make it a quality story. It shows promise though, I think if you take your time on your next story and fill it out a little more you'd have a good read on your hands.

Also, paragraphs should be more then one sentence long. When you break it up as you did it feels very choppy and disconnected.

-S-

It was great made my pussy cum

Good story - made my pussy wet and begin to ache.

I had never read about a 'tittie' job before, sounds interesting and am wondering if a common practice?

My cunt runnith over. Nun love is fun love. A woman of God who gets her pipes cleaned is such a hypocrite it makes my juices run and run and run. Keep on licking!!!!!

I like the concept but the story could use a little build up and substance.

nun sex is best sex . .awesome story

This was great, my pussy is still dripping. The nun part makes me hot and the titty fuck made me cum like mad...more please.

I've had this one with my gorgeous wife. The imagery is so erotic.

It had me spurting cum on the very last word

This was a new fantasy for me....I had to masturbate while reading...My cunt is still aching from two orgasms. I wish i could rub my clit against a nuns tits.

As I read this story I was glad my trusty vibrator was near . I have not cum that much in a very long time. I was shaking for what seemed liked hours afterwards.

must say that was an awesome orgasmic experience the tittifuck took the cake. uh-maze-ing

it was totally awesome. i hadn't come that hard in a long time. thank you... i love this whole "forbidden love" thing.

This was a great story! My own pussy is wet and throbbing:-) The location (church) and people (jilted bride and horny nun) are so fucking hot!

Kristen

kac0375@gmail.com

Great story! Hope there is more?

hot

Would have been 5 stars if not for the tit fucking- never heard of that lol

Had high hopes for this but a subpar attempt. From emotional devastation to uncontrolled horniness.

If the reader focuses on the nun aspect as a fetish - no wrong done.

If the reader appreciates seduction, temptation, and resistance - then this story could have been better.