All Comments on 'Nun Better'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Every catholic boys dream of the cute sister

Excellent!

Harper2Harper2over 14 years ago
Different

A delightfully and refreshingly different story that is well told. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ending Was Too Obvious

ending was too obvious early into the story, put me right off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Predictable

Liked your style, but guessed the end since the fourth paragraph. Would have liked an epilogue too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
will there be more??

That hit Hard at one of my fantasies. Well done and continue the story line

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
None Better

At the top of the class for this one. I don't usually comment at all. This is fine writing.

buttman52buttman52almost 12 years ago
Great Story

I just Love stories like this and hope you keep on writing,and I will keep on reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Predictable

Sorry, but as soon as he met the nun on the platform I knew the ending. Kind of ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nothing wrong with predictability

I too figured out the twist immediately, but that's all right! That was what I wanted!

TXhardsucker69TXhardsucker69over 9 years ago
Hot Nun

Loved your story, a fantasy I am sure tons of people have, including me. Had me aroused the whole time, loved the writing style. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice!

I personally feel that this is a great story. However, I feel that more could be added on.

spankfunforspankfunforabout 9 years ago
Angel or Devil ?

Marie Claire has Seen the Light! As a Nun, God in Heaven is Great! As a Woman, She has Found Her Heaven on Earth! ALL Your Stories are Excellent! Could You Add Chapters? Either Way, Thank You for Writing Them!

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Very hot

And so much fun to read! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
FANTASTIC 5 STARS

I would love to be giving you more.

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