by Pussrider
A delightfully and refreshingly different story that is well told. Well done.
ending was too obvious early into the story, put me right off.
Liked your style, but guessed the end since the fourth paragraph. Would have liked an epilogue too.
That hit Hard at one of my fantasies. Well done and continue the story line
At the top of the class for this one. I don't usually comment at all. This is fine writing.
I just Love stories like this and hope you keep on writing,and I will keep on reading.
Sorry, but as soon as he met the nun on the platform I knew the ending. Kind of ruined it for me.
I too figured out the twist immediately, but that's all right! That was what I wanted!
Loved your story, a fantasy I am sure tons of people have, including me. Had me aroused the whole time, loved the writing style. Well done!
I personally feel that this is a great story. However, I feel that more could be added on.
Marie Claire has Seen the Light! As a Nun, God in Heaven is Great! As a Woman, She has Found Her Heaven on Earth! ALL Your Stories are Excellent! Could You Add Chapters? Either Way, Thank You for Writing Them!