All Comments on 'Nurse Demoness Ch. 02'

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Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Now it begins

I feel like the first two chapters were really good, but I felt it was mostly character development. Now she is ready for a crisis. She falls in love or something

Tw0Cr0ws about 8 years ago

please get a proofreader

There are so many wrong words.

The wrong words are like potholes in the road, making what should be a smooth ride of a story into a jarring bumpy ride.

I like your story, but don't like having to stop and wonder "What did that mean?"

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