All Comments on 'Nurse Nancy; Dr. Dan Ch. 01'

Always wondered what happened to the main characters in my classic children's book. All kidding aside, hot and well written.

Very well written story - I can picture myself in it. Tease me and please me - that is what this story does. Please, write Chapter 2 soon!

Mmmmm, I couldn't wait to read this so I did quick read and wound up with one hand on the mouse and the other in my cunny. I'll email you some other comments, but for now this is a bell-ringer. Jeanne

Such a beautifully crafted story, perfectly enticing storyline and characters and orgasm shattering dialogue. I love the start and can't wait for more. Truly a sensual gateway. xoxoxoxo Annette

The story development was perfectly scripted. VERY HOT!! I'm looking forward to chapter 2.

Keep writing!

Wonderful story, as always.

Hopefully Governess is next in line for a sequel.

I liked the plot and subplot, fun stuff. The food analogies destroyed the sexy parts I was enjoying... keilbasa, "Dan batter", lima bean. Consider a different approach if you wish.

I have no idea how you come up with this fiction, or how you find the time to write such wonderful, long, erotic prose.

You have to be one of the top fiction writers on here x x x

Great work. detailed and yes I did play with myself whilst reading LOL x x x

Oooh get that cock hard and lets get some arse fucking!!!

You really have a way with words and your imagination is unbelievable!No wonder I love to read your stories

terribly silly!