All Comments on 'NY Legal Ch. 01'

One of the best stories I've read in a long time...well done!

I worked pretty hard on this one so it's very nice to know you enjoyed it.

I honestly and truly love this story tbh please update soon

I am planning on more chapters but these are more like vignettes. So where as you will see Jackie and Ray again, it will be more in passing than as the main characters. I'm currently trying to get chapter two done right now and should have it posted sometime around Christmas...

Which is pretty fucked up if you think about it.:)

This story & Jackie's name are out an episode of the tv show Blue Bloods.

They have XXX sex on Blue Bloods?

Man, I gotta binge that show again!

Say that out loud. ordinary effort. 2 stars

"Say that out loud. ordinary effort. 2 stars"

Huh. I say that all the time.

Usually after a particularly good bowel movement.:)

An abusive story. His arguements are specious and self serving. There is a massive distance between rape and playing submissive games. It is unreal and nonsense.

I am sorry you feel that way. However, as this IS erotica and NOT the real world. I'm OK with all of that. This is NOT intended to be a primer on "How to bang a Police officer." This is intended to be nothing more than an arousing tale.

I am also sorry you didn't enjoy it. Perhaps we are simply not aroused by the same things. This was a nonconsent/reluctance story. And I feel this chapter lived up to that. Is that perhaps not a genre you enjoy?

Thank you.

Fascinating story. Well-written, very creative. The sex is excellent.

@Anon on 2/21/2021 Thank you. I really enjoyed writing this one and I'm glad you liked it.

Well written and psychologically interesting. Thank you for your story.

To: Anon, Thank you for the comment. I'm very happy you enjoyed it. :)