All Comments on 'Nymph in Limbo'

This wasn't bad. Some of the writing was a bit thick. For the Nymph sections, not bad, but Brad using similar flowery thought processes seemed a bit off. Also, there was no dividers indicating a change of point of view. And while a resolution was implied, it was never shown, and I don't think that works for this piece. All in all solid, but there's a lot of room for improvement.