All Comments on 'NYU Summer Break Threesome'

I got confused when Ryland's name changed to Braden for a bit.

You were doing so well until you said Braden over and over again!

It took to long to get to the actual story of sexual delights. You don’t need two pages to set the story up. To much details involved in the story, you don’t need to explain everything in detail. It detracts from the story.

Although you’re a good writer, the story got boring because of the details.

I really enjoyed the story and will look into reading more of the author's stuff. Although, I do want to make a comment about some other comments. One in particular said the male character was called Braden, "over and over again." That's just factually not true. A quick search of the story would tell you that the name Braden was used 3 times, the male character's actual name in the story was used 150. It was a small error...get over it. Anyway...good work, SluttyBisexualGuy.

it is now 2020 and still no followup to this incredible story. In what ice age will it be forthcoming?? You are a good writer btw.

Snakes don't drink milk

unbelievably amazingly hot story

To heck with the literary critics --- this is a great story with a great setup and a beautifully long sex scene. Yes. Please. A followup would be fantastic. Thank you for taking the time to write this.

Please continue this 🙏 lol great story

Great story, but just a constructive suggestion: Lose all those analogies. "Like a building before proper earthquake codes?" Phew... The story is good enough to stand on its own; you don't need all those bad analogies. This would then be shorter, easier to read, and better with those weird distractions removed.

If I were you editor -- and I was an editor for 10 years -- I would cut them all, then hand back the story and see if you didn't agree.

The story was really great. I couldn't stop reading it. I didn't need a dictionary either.

The story was a fun and sensuous story. A fantasy of mine. So hot