by JordonLynn
hmm Nice.. waiting to read the muliple penetrations
Great start to the story. I hope Dorothy becomes a true black cock slut made to do things she wouldn't otherwise. It would be great to see her become a slave Quentin and his friends. Hopefully you will write many more chapters in the very near future.
Please keep going. But don't make her slavish - that's so often done. Let her keep her spunk (no pun intended). Thanks.
The story was great, very sensual and sexy. I like the build up. But the way she just became a slut at the blink of an eye was a little hard to believe. I barely lasted through the story without cumming all over the keyboard. I am looking forward to the next installment. P.S. Great Title.
good story hope it continues and i agree with above she should not become so slaveish as it has been done b4 but whatever u do good luck hope to read it soon
You have done it again and i hope you keep doing it. Reading your work makes me wet and hot all over.
Devilish
Loved it, awesome story, without going too much into just run of the mill story porn. Very Unique and fresh.
Good job
I love who you managed to capture the desperation Dorothy experienced that drove her into the extreme world of pornography. Thankfully, unlike some authors you do not glorify the pornography industry as a rather desirable career option, but it does present its attractions for those who are craving more than the ordinary. I myself have often fantasized about being a porn starlet if only an amateur one! but alas, i dont have the gutts to take the extreme step. till then its back to college while i live my vicarious life out through your stories... keep writting!
Science has unequivocally proven, that male African American genitalia are not larger, but in fact are on average minutely smaller. Yet garbage like this get's interest and traction. One star, since zero isn't an option. To answer your question, "Do I continue with this new storyline, or go back to Diane’s blackcock confessional? " How about stop writing this stupid crap or if you can't, just stop altogether?? jahoo
Excellent reading! I'd love hear more of Dorothy's black cock addiction it reminds me so much of 2 ex wives.
wow sexy fun, dont know if there is more in this trilogy, but i will be looking !