All Comments on 'Oasis'

by quirkybee

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tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
WHEN IN A COMA AFTER A TRAGEDY

it takes a long time to find the way out and back. TK U MLJ LV NV

RePhilRePhilover 7 years ago
Good story!

My only suggestion is to pay attention to the comments of some of this section main writers. Look in the sidebar on the LW home page for them. Us readers are solely an emotional bunch that can't seem to get past the plot lines in most cases. Write us another one please.

quirkybeequirkybeeover 7 years agoAuthor
thanks for the encouragement :)

yeah I considered LW, but it's all inside his head, so...

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