All Comments on 'Obeying Master'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good story

I loved it

BazzzBazzzalmost 16 years ago
Too short

I can see by some of your other stories that you like them short and sweet. With your imagination might I suggest that you really put together a plot and write a longer story? You have the talent and no doubt will improve with each story yet the best stories are those with a well organized and descriptive plot. Otherwise keep up the good work, we can always use another good interracial writer on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I've done this.

In Burger King. Soooo hot. Wore two black loads on face and showed three sisters (7-11) how to scoop up black sperm and swallow they were all in awe and I'm sure came to it many many times in the next months in the shower

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