All Comments on 'Oblivion Ch. 02'

a good tale with a amazing story line.

I am absolutely enamored with this story! You have an amazing imagination an your ability to put it into words so eloquently is outstanding. Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward for more!

this story captured my attention. Please continue.

Amazing plot, author ^^ its very refreshing and intriguing, please do continue with this series.

I don't normally comment, but dammit, this story is good and I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep it up!

"It certainly worked for a ravenous spider about three and a half hours ago. Dear me. Look what you're making me do, Creed. I'm an immortal being beyond comprehension who has been alive for thousands of millennia and you're making me break time down into hours. How dare you?" Daedronus demanded as he crossed his arms over his chest in offense.

I love your humor!

Scawp is possibly a little Dobbyesque, but in my imagination he/she/it?! looks nothing like Dobby!

And... this is shaping up to be a really good original story too!

I love Deadronus's sense of humor. I could read this story forever and ever