All Comments on 'Oblivion Ch. 03'

So worth pulling the previous chapters up. I cannot and choose to not try to imagine what will happen in your next chapter. I can only wait until it is done. Thank you for this story.

I'm still really enjoying the humour - got a hint of Roald Dahl also.. "Well... there are good sorts, great sorts, terrible sorts, bad sorts, mediocre sorts, strange sorts, and downright weird sorts, the sort that are weird, even to me...But you shouldn't worry. This will be the amazing sort." Love it!

And... this has the making of a great saga/fairy tale. From this chapter I'm guessing you've got the makings of a great plot and already I care about Daedronus, Kristasia, Lonie, Srawp and Creed.

Seriously, keep it coming, and thank you for writing.

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I hope Deadronus kicks some ass!! I would love it if it turns out that Kristasia actually strengthens him, instead of weakens him. That would be dope lol