All Comments on 'Observation of a Breeding'

Great story, very hot, and hints of backstory to help set the stage without letting it take over. Look forward to your next chapter!

I'm a long time fan of that story universe Kitty has at her blog- This was short by comparison to most of them but HOLY CRAP you captured everything. You two should collaborate on some new stuff for the series- I can't wait to read more!

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I enjoyed this story - would love read more - my cock got hard reading it and that's the test...and this story passed:)

Need more, please!!!

Would be great to be a breeder. Bareback baby making fucking is the bomb

Are you going to update?

Beautiful and delicious. And how complimentary, specifically referring to the Breeder as an Australian Breeder. Haha.

Where has the author Kitty gone? I've been dying to read The Colony

This story is so good. Please continue writing it.

Where can we find the rest of the story??

Has anyone found the rest of this story??

To be continued.....? When? It's been 12 years since you've written this. Probably it will never be continued. But the story had started well and had lots of scope. Sad it had to end this way.