All Comments on 'Obsession'

Really good concept, a little weak on the sex though. Still, I liked it as a story.

VERY well written. Not in the least erotic, and altogether disturbing. I APPRECIATED this story very much, but I'm not sure I LIKED it much. Well done, I think.

Well, I think this is exceptionally well-written AND very erotic as well!!

I'm sorry to disagree with Anonymouses (who are being respectfully polite and honest), but there's nothing disturbingly unpleasant here. It's an enchanting, fairy-tale like story of obsession, humorous and unexpected and, in an off-hand way, a tribute to the power of art.

I thought the sex was plentifully erotic and, by the standards of Higher Erotica, plentiful in itself. I know here on literotica I and most writers tend to indulge the play-by-play to fabulous lengths, but the details of the cunnilingus, anilingus, strap-on sex and fetishism here are hardly any more minimalistic than what you'd expect in a Susie Bright anthology or the pages of Anais Nin, Anne Rice, or other Higher Art writers of erotica.

And I strongly feel that this writer is, quite seriously, functioning at that exalted level.

I just love this story!! Jukebox is a tremendous talent.

I just came in my pjs under a blanket across from my grandma ughhhhhhh god fuck my pussy man this was soooooooooo good ughhhhbhh ohhhhhhhhhhhhh

I started reading your pieces just because of my fetish for absolute control in form of hypnosis or mind control respecitvely the absolute lack of control and while reading piece after piece over months I started realizing that Im not only into guys which is an amazing discovery for someone autistic like me.. Its hard for myself to learn or know anything about me so thanks for that... Your writing is intriguing especially because I can understand it absolutely literally and dont have to question whether I misunderstood something. I appreciate you a lot it would be kind of fun to read about someone like me because Im absolutely dead to any sign a person is interested in me I only notice at the point where they spit it out or when they pull a move on me but even then Im not sure whether they mean it or not... and even when I have sex with someone it is still in a gray area since I rarely even know whether I like it or want it or not its hard to figure that out Im not better at guessing than others really