All Comments on 'Obsession and Submission'

by readyforprimetime

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FailedscoutFailedscoutalmost 6 years ago
WoW!!!

Great story! I loved it!!!

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Good one, hope there's a Ch. 2 coming. Not sure if you're mistaking prologue for epilogue, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good premise.

But the sex is too mechanical. Not enough slow, step-by-step buildup.

Three stars.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 1 year ago

Very "tasty" story and life

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