by elleVeut
Thankyou for writing this. I hope you give us many more stories.
What a wonderful chapter! I'm so happy it finally came to a perfect end. What a ride. I need to walk that one off.
Given how old this story is and the lack of any update I doubt the author will see these comments.
Julian is a rapist. The progression to the final act was inevitable so I give you credit for making him so unlikeable. Well done.
Sara is in for a rude awakening at some point. It is inevitable he will wander if not become embroiled in a rape allegation. So sad for what has been portrayed as a beautiful and adoring woman.
Ethan will try his best but he needs to aspire to impact play in order for a long term need to be addressed. Humiliation, bondage, edging and assaults by vibrators might do the trick for a while but Candace has demons she needs to manage.
I felt bad for Candace and was afraid narcotics were going to become a staple with Julian. Given her previous issues I fear she would have succumbed to them in a heart beat. So glad she went back to Ethan and he showed some early signs of domination. I wish them a HEA.
Thanks for th story I gave it a steady five star rating for each chapter