All Comments on 'Obverse Pt. 01'

I think this story could develop pretty well. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Its definitey different, well written and I am anticipating more. Keep going!

I really like what you've done with this. Do me a favor and don't drag out part two for too long!

there will eventually be another chapter. i'm not prolific, and I have a couple of other stories people are waiting for continuations of (gentrification, the art of princess maintenance).

Hoping for this story to continue.

the subtlest and cruelest emotion

a few minor typos

One of the best stories I have read anywhere. Characters were real, developed amply --> robustly for ch 1.

Relatable "clash" of chic and well shadowed use of "when student is ready ... teacher will appear"

I am a wanna be mystical person, but science and logic bound. So inclusion of conservation of matter helpful (for me).

I also was impressed with the cadence of your story ending "test" which you keenly stalloned me (cliffhanger).

An idea that the numismatic might convey is that his tribe is sparse, triage required, and priority to Sarah Connors' of world.

Anyway, plz consider posting chapter 2