All Comments on 'Obvious, in Retrospect Ch. 02'

I'm not in this marriage cause it just went down the toilet.

The wife is a cheating slut and their supposed friends are anything but... I can't see this marriage going anywhere but to a divorce court.

W.T.F?

since the first installment. From swinging to one-sided cheating (and possible or likely impregnation) is a big step, and it's hard not to see trouble ahead. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks, ohio

Don't stop now...ok?

The wife is really just a slut whore and has no respect for her husband. Just do him a favor and leave. Divorce him and get it over with.

Damn Bitch! I hate her... which makes the writer a good one even if I did not like the theme. I gave him five stars...

Who needs enemies with a wife like her. I suspect her day is coming. All actions have consequences. She certainly doesn't love her husband to humiliate him like this.

naughty juicy delicious fucking tart. You need a thorough spanking. BAD GIRL. (I'm looking for approval from the haters and flamers. Is this ok? Even more venom?) Mancelt.

She's nothing but a cheating slut now, a nasty dirty fucking slut. Since she let him have her asshole,and while getting fucked up the ass have a massive orgasm and to top it all off, he shot his load in her ass. That's just her being a dirty nasty cheating whore slut. I certainly hope she doesn't get pregnant, sluts like her shouldn't be allowed to have children. Her husband should be allowed to have her uterus removed before kicking her nasty whore ass out.It was bad enough having her cheat for the fact that she wanted to be pregnant, but this is just plain cheating for the pleasure of getting her lover's big cock.

This marriage is definitely not headed for the divorce court, instead it is turning into something completely natural. It is filled with not only lust but love as well, and I'm looking forward to yet even more swinging to the point that both of these lovelies become pregged by each other's husband.

While the subject brings pain to anyone hurt by cheating, its still just a story. Each of the characters is a bit "anal" no pun intended. Lets call it an x rated Seinfeld!

I would like to see where you take this as there was such a change from chapters 1 to 2. Just dont take 3 months to do it. Thanks.

You should do more chapters...So many directions you could move in this story...will be interesting to see which one you choose.

More please, it is getting better with every paragraph, forget the critics, just write for your fans ...you have one in me and I'd say from the comments much more than just one, thanks for taking the time

very well written

....be faking it on some level with hubby she will eventually always be faking it on some level with anyone,if she's human.Sad,reallylol-pistolpackinpete

For her to go to full cheat mode. But you left out the most important part: how did the original fuck on the beach start. Who initiated it and how? Authors often leave out significant explanations which detract from the enjoyment of the story. This is another one of those unfortunately.

A little swinging turned her into a.cheating whore.

just another whore wife .. by a whore aithor who has no clue how to put out a story peoperly conncted!