All Comments on 'Oceanbreeze Court Ch. 02'

by HStoner

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DrizdartDrizdartover 6 years ago
Not as complete

I wish the story here had been as complete as Ch. 1 ... Explaining the situation is fine, but there just wasn't as much "fun" to be had here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bree has become Bre

Needs a little more action in the plot too ... maybe Part 3 will have it? Also, is Stephanie going to make a re-appearance, with a boyfriend hopefully.

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