All Comments on 'Odd Socks and a Crack Pipe'

by Spectre17

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Suite21menSuite21menalmost 9 years ago
Expected a Different Plot Twist

I thought for sure that Caroline was in cahoots with Terrance and trying to set him up for a fall. A fall did happen but not the way I expected.

Thanks for the fine read.

Spectre17Spectre17almost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks Suite21Men

your feedback is greatly appreciated.

I prefer stories on lit with a bit of a plot. Orriginaly I had planned this story to be more about the mother, Katie and what she would do to protect her kids from an unsuitable father. However a long the journey, I enjoyed writing about Seb, so Terrence's character was given a more minor role.

Thanks for taking the trouble to comment

Spectre

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