All Comments on 'Of Gods and Vampires Ch. 04'

loved it. great work as usual. please continue!

it would have been a five except the spelling and grammar errors kept pulling me out of the flow of the story.

THE STORY is fantastic! I'm so glad you came back to finish it.

This was the best story I've ever read on the Internet.

If this could be given more than 100%, I'd do it in an instant. Wonderfully written from start to finish. Mind blowing, captivating and more.

So incredible! This story is utterly amazing! Words can't descibe!

that was truly the best

oh my. this was an extremely well thought out story. better than many i have read on this website. 5 stars to you, Onyxwolf. :]

wow is all i can think of to say about this story, and i must say that in all the years that i have been reading stories on this site this is one of the best if not the best story i have ever read. i rarely comment but i had to give you props on such a well done story

wow.... no other word can describe how awesome this story is!! one of the few great stories on this site. if you were to ever publish this story into a book, i would absolutely go & buy it!!

man..... i'm speechless with its awesomeness!!!!! can't wait to read what else you've written.

Wow, what a story!

And Truth. Without hope all is for naught. I love this story. You have a wonderful talent for weaving a masterful story. Looking forward to more blood, sweat & tears from you.

Loved the story although it did need a little bit of proof reading but over all I really enjoyed your writing style

And one of the best I have read, Deeply moving on a spiritual level. Do need an editor though. Loved the ending. May piece be with you friend.

Sincerely, CAVL.

I wanted to say that I liked your story, although I thought that is was rather strange. But I loved the 'spiritual' side. And I liked the whole build up to the (unexpected) end.

JW

ya, there are a few grammer oops. but with all great things, a few oops always enter.

Even published books in stores have oops so no big deal. some of the popular guys and gals miss from time to time.

On to better things, words and deeds.. Great story, seemed very well thought out,

Would like to continue to look for more but how can you top this one. Somewhere there is a better one. As with gunslingers of yesteryear, always a faster gun somewhere down the line. Thanks for taking time to entertain we, the realm of avid readers. coneger2 atgmai