All Comments on 'Of Sisters & Brothers Pt. 02'

I enjoyed the story. Interesting twist and turns but where is the next part??????

Very good read. Next part please

It nice to actually read a STORY for a change. great job. Can't wait for the next part.

Really good read. Where's the next part? Don't keep us waiting.

You've hooked me now. I enjoy your style and am waiting for more. Thanks for a great read.

I want to apologize for my not finishing this story. I recently lost someone very dear to me and cannot find it in me to complete this. There was a lot of her personality in this particular story-line.

I have taken a break from writing and need time to grieve.

American Gypsy

Really good story, I'm hooked. I like Clay. I'm sorry for your loss. I know how hard it is to continue doing something when you loss someone special to you that has been a part of it. Take time to grieve. Your readers will wait for you.

A fan from the Philippines

BE HONEST WITH THE READERS your just lazy and realize you totally fucked up the story and decided to drop it.

You're a cunt mate. Hope you get cancer and then fall under a bus and die a slow, painful, miserable death.

DOES NT MAKE SENSE,,,MAYBE THINK IS JAMES BOND 007,what the fuck it s so fucking no good it s even worst than no goog.........

I could give a rats ass what other ignorant individuals have to say about your story in a negative manner. Finished or unfinished - this story is simply amazing. I love your cadence, your bright insight on linguistic use, and most of all - this hit so many personal cords; it was a delight to read. I hope you're healing and time is repairing your loss. Meanwhile, I am fishing through your library - as you have a very big Fan here...........

:) Allie

Haha, the people saying that negative stuff are just insanely jealous and are hoping to discourage you. This is some of the best stuff on the whole site.....very well done - keep it coming!

When will you complete this story, i think it was going just fine. Finish it! E57

I am very sorry for your lost and hope you be better soon. I will keep checking this site for the conclusion. Keep your head up!

I wouldn't bother carrying on with this, it's utter diatribe.

this story was amazing. Please, please finish it! You should try writing a book. You have a gift and I'm sure you will be published.

Please finish. More, more, more!

Amazing story, hope you continue the epic adventure?

When are you gong to give us the rest of it? I hate getting into something and then it just stops when the going gets good.

still for the next chapter/s...your story and writing is good...hope you could get back to it...

Great story line and now nothing? Apparently the author has dropped off the face of the planet!!

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