All Comments on 'Of The Deepest Dye'

by Victoria Veiss

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dirtyloverdirtyloverabout 20 years ago
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great story :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Wow.

This story is absolutely awesome.

The characters are well defined, which is kind of rare, and it's both gross and touching. The mood shifts so flawlessly as more and more of the past is revealed and all of it has the feel of reality to it. Not in the way that, logically, this kind of thing happens, but in the way that you don't doubt that this stuff went on between these characters and that it effected them. This is more than a story about sex, it's a mind-fuck, and that's why I like it so much.

You are a great story teller. Brava!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
well dun

This Was An Amazing Story Very Well Told The Characters Were S0 Believable And Well Thought 0ut U Did An Awesome J0b My Dear ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

really well written and really fucking sad. not exactly something to get off to but good work

SeakinkletsSeakinkletsalmost 3 years ago

So many twists and turns, for a story so short its mind boggling how off the rails the second half is. It kept me morbidly interested for sure. I am si confused, is the wrestler a demon? Like actual magical demon? If the wrestler was a demon was he purposefully letting himself be abused by his manager? It was genuinely harrowing reading his descriptions of the rape and abuse but by the end I'm confused as to what actually happened and who's actually sad. I'm not sure if the story is *good* per say, but I'm spending a lot more time thinking about it after finishing reading it than most smut so if nothing else its interesting

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