All Comments on 'Off-Road Goddess'

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xperia2995xperia2995about 11 years ago
Awsome

This story was a perfect blend of reality and fantasy. However being perfectly straight I disliked other males in this story and the series IMO.

But still loved the other parts.

This is not one of those quick pure fantasy stuff you usually see.

This particualar story is the best one in your series.

Mikethe3DGuy2Mikethe3DGuy2about 4 years ago

Excellent job here. Good simple storytelling style, natural dialogue, and a very believable story. Julia's hot, and I love that she leaves Eric hanging with no explanation or extra detail. Keep him guessing and wanting more.

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