by DoctorMason
The writing is fine, but it's a silly premise. And there are three big items in the story that just aren't sexy: 1) an apparently dim-witted woman who is 2) turned on by a gyno exam, and 3) is raped and seems to want more.
Try again, though. You can string words into sentences, which isn't always the case with smut writers.
MIght be a good idea to work with an editor for a while
But I agree it was rape, she had to be dumb as a box of rocks if she thought a nurse playing with her tits and going down on her was part of an exam
Come on, people. It's just a story. The young lady clearly enjoyed this (fictional) sexual experience. Why in the world are some of you so indignant about it?
I liked it. She enjoyed it. Where can I get an exam like that? Schedule me.
I don't understand why others felt this was rape. It's a FANTASY story and the nain character was ok with it.
Fun story that got my juices flowing! Would live to have an exam like that!