All Comments on 'Off to College'

by DoctorMason

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What????

Why did the Doc come so fast...you should have stretched it out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
innocence lost

A rape disguised as a medical exam. Disgusting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Horrible

rape is not erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Kind of silly.

The writing is fine, but it's a silly premise. And there are three big items in the story that just aren't sexy: 1) an apparently dim-witted woman who is 2) turned on by a gyno exam, and 3) is raped and seems to want more.

Try again, though. You can string words into sentences, which isn't always the case with smut writers.

MIght be a good idea to work with an editor for a while

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
Well written

But I agree it was rape, she had to be dumb as a box of rocks if she thought a nurse playing with her tits and going down on her was part of an exam

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Relax

Come on, people. It's just a story. The young lady clearly enjoyed this (fictional) sexual experience. Why in the world are some of you so indignant about it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I liked it. She enjoyed it. Where can I get an exam like that? Schedule me.

lydia_kittylydia_kittyabout 8 years ago
Erotic and hot!

I don't understand why others felt this was rape. It's a FANTASY story and the nain character was ok with it.

Fun story that got my juices flowing! Would live to have an exam like that!

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