by Xarth
I feel like the whole story was a setup for the line to mom about getting a healthy snack like she asked. That was hilarious. Also, cool best friends are amazing.
I enjoyed the story a lot but when you said there was butt stuff I didn't think it would be multiple pages about. I mean anal is fine, that was too much when you're talking about a girl learning about sex the first time. Most women do not like it and as a girl myself and from what my own friends have said Theyre not fond of it much either.
Don't get me wrong I really liked the story still. It was distracting considering how new to sex this girl was, y'kmow. I loved the character and I loved that both characters were in love and it wasn't just about sex. You're my favorite writer on here so I knew I'd enjoy this no matter what.
"I was just getting a healthy snack like you're always telling me to."
What a beautiful, baller response. Jesus, I want to be her when I grow up lol
Also, I would read a few more chapters of their story. Are they in love? Do they stay together? I need closure!