All Comments on 'Office Bitch Ch. 01'

Animal transformations aren't usually my thing, but this was very well done. Keep up the good work!

1. She's now a dog. (against her will)

2. Dogs only have sex when female is in heat. (is he ready for puppies?)

3. Can he support all of them on his pay? (doubt she can keep her career now)

4. Where will they live? (his apt. on his pay or her house on his pay)

I wanna know what happens next!

rape...should be nonconsent/reluctance

So, this guy has raped and mutated a woman he supposedly likes and admires, not only sexually, but also of her mind and her humanity too? I feel a little sick after reading this.

it's semi well written but the problem is we hardly know our characters the story had very little in the way of plot or intent and we have no back story