All Comments on 'Office Flirt Gets Hers'

It was good but it was too short. You could've really developed things between them some more...maybe drawn out his "need" for revenge before finally having him overcome by lust for her that he forgot about his desire for revenge. Also the jumping between tenses was a little awkward.

i really liked it but calling his penis a 'manroot' was kinda weird and ruined the mood for me a little..

"I can't, Damian. We need to stop this."

If the same person is still talking, put it in the same quotation marks.