All Comments on 'Office Politics Pt. 01'

by JJennings

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Poor Spelling/Grammar took me out of it.

i got two paragraphs in and you spelled "too" as "to" and "complemented" as "complimented".

Please get someone to edit your story before submission.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Promising start

Ignore the asshole

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Matt got himself into a sexual harrassment lawsuit

The good news? Like everyone else these days he had his I-phone on him and had recorded everything. Alice was fired and went to jail. Matt got a huge settlement from the Company. There was nothing original or clever about this silly story. Not erotic. Nothing interesting. Bad conceived. Poorly done. Totally implausible, even for fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I want more of this blackmail story please!

PutaBuscadorPutaBuscadoralmost 9 years ago
Want more

Love corruption stories, please continue this!

wolf9696wolf9696almost 9 years ago
5/5

please...do write more .... can hardly wait for her to start topping him

aboychickaboychickalmost 9 years ago
Good beginning but clean up those tags!

I liked this story though it doesn't have the most original of set-ups (but I doubt that any of the stories posted here are entirely original).

Disregard the anonymous harassment comment, which only throws a wet blanket over a good beginning.

However, I would work hard to clean up the tags after quoting what somebody said like she/he "called out," "concluded," "exclaimed," "fumbled," "squeaked," "offered," "questioned," etc. Like adverbs, these are energy vampires. If you limit your tags to "said" or "replied" and instead have the actual words that are being said have the power, along with the action around them, then the story would move along with more gusto.

Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
excellent

Your description of the transition from horror to wanting the gay friends cock in mouth was very well written.

Have felt the same.

Cheers. keep going !

HeisenhugHeisenhugalmost 9 years ago

Well that was painfully predictable... Well hung guy, with a neon sign saying straight above his head, gets hired and instantly blackmailed by also well hung predatory trans bombshell. Hired by a company that apparently has only one person competent/assigned to look at qualifications (cause degree level education is so easy to fake *sarcasm*) because the aggressor thinks the best way to handle something really illegal is to commit gross misconduct by hiring him then double down with a round of sexual harassment and blackmail.

Even the briefly mentioned supporting characters are one dimensional clichés with name tags.

If it didn't seem to be trying so hard the be a serious story I'd suggest tweaking it a little and putting it in the satire category. Sorry author, I simply can't see any real depth to any part of this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
This fantasy break brought to you

By those not so friendly folks at Reality Sux! Because sadly, what's actually occurred, is the TS character has managed to clock herself at her own place of employment... causing ten times more problems for her than the poor slob she's trying to supposedly blackmail over where he graduated. Illegal? On some planet in a galaxy far, far, FAR away, possibly. But will everyone in this company remember all of the watercooler gossip about their boss being a 'shemale'? Oh yeah, whatever happened ta him.... er, her?! ......We now return you to your regularly scheduled fantasy......

hornygirl01hornygirl01almost 9 years ago
serious

Really what happened next my pussy wet now

BrendaNWBrendaNWalmost 9 years ago
please continue

Yes.. ignore the negativity... love to hear more of the story... ma be he slowly comes out as TG himself at work... ;)

pinktickalerpinktickaleralmost 9 years ago
Yes!

Alright! The biggest turn on in a while!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice fantasy

But come on lying on a resume' is not a crime. So she owns him? Sorry doesn't work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great start!

The naysayers are forgetting one thing. He didn't go to school, he's smart enough to "fake" it as an accountant, but that doesn't necessarily mean he's smart enough to know lying on a resume isn't a crime, just cause for immediate dismissal.

If you did want the threat to be real, maybe include in a later segment, her going over the papers with him. Besides the application, maybe there were other signed affadavits for high-ranking clients (military, Fortune 500, etc) where lying on them would result in a perjury/fraud offense.

It could be an interesting plot point if later he did discover her falsehood, the turmoil if he wanted to give up the sex for his freedom. Also, does she have a stable of other workers, will she play puppet master and get them not only to do things with her but themselves as well.

Anyway, truly hope the story continues

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great start

This was really a turn on for me. I'd love to have a hot TS Tranny come on to me and suck my cock. I love snowballing and getting my own cum in a hot sloppy kiss. Now the 2nd chapter should have him sucking Alice's cock. Then, he needs to get fucked by her (him?). I can't wait to read the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
nice story

i was working with a older man one day just to help him out one of his worker did not show up so he ask if I want work for a day I said yes I could use the money well I work all day we fix the fence and clean up around the house when my pants ripe well I did not have under wear on when I bend over he saw my ass I had other men said I have a nice ass but I just laugh it off well we were done work and he said look I gave you a ride home if you like I said no its all right I just live down the road he said your pants are ripe and some one will see your ass and I have to pay you I then said all right then you can drive me I got in the truck and he drove me home he gave me my money and said I walk behind you so no one will see your ripe pants as we walk I heard him said you know what you have a nice ass for a man i told him I hear that before just then I felt his hand on my ass we were at the door and I unlock it I ask him if he want to come in for coffee he said yes I live in a one bed room place I close the door and put the coffee on I got two cups and soon the coffee was done we talk for awhile I got up and told him I will put on some clean pants I walk over to the bed room left the door open a bit as I remove my pants he was at the door way you have a nice bedroom I look up and saw him just as I pick up a pair of pants I felt his hands again on my ass he said what a nice ass you have if you were a girl I would shove my cock in there I do not no why I said you like my ass you think I would like to have a cock up there that when he said I am sorry I do not no what got over me I am a bi male I like both I told him I never been with a male before he said well then if you let me I will teach you how to please a man if you like I then told him a lie look I been with a lady one day and she gave me this I show him my nightie he look at it and said put it on after I had on the nightie he had his big hard cock out and I was on my knees and sucking his cock he tell me that my girl suck your boss cock he came in my mouth after I clean his cock he told me that was good he look at the time I have to go can I see you in the morning I said yes well it rain that night so I did not have to work just then the door bell rang when I open the door he was there he said it looks we will not work till later I said yes he had a bag in his hand I told him to come in I was still in my nightie he just look at me and said I have some thing for you I like you to wear just then he pull out a bra and panties set I want you to wear them now be a good girly and put them on I want to see what my new girly boy look in them I put them on and they fit nice I walk out to him and he said now that a whole lot better now go put on a shirt and pants we are going to my place I did as told well after we got there he show me around the house there were a maid working he to her to come in the bedroom when she came in she remove his clothes and then my clothes came off then I look at her she was removing her clothes as well right down to her bra and panties just then he walk over to me and kiss me and then kiss her he told me to kiss her I did as told just then I felt her hand on my cock and a hand at my ass soon we were naked that when I saw the maid big male cock well after that I was sucking his cock and her my boss said its time girly to feel what it like when a cock in your ass hole well it happen so fast I had his hard big cock all the way in me he was pounding my ass good yes I said please boss man come inside my ass he said for a man never had a cock in there you sure like it I told him yes sir I told him the lady only use a dido cock now I know how it feel to have a cock a really man cock he told me that good just then a lady came in well dear was he good he said yes dear I look up and it was the lady well dear you like my man cock I said yes miss well then you will be are girly bitch she walk over and said what a nice bra just think that the only thing you will wear after that I was there bitch

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Awesome!

would love to meet a boss like Alice :)

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