by writemarksmith
Love the way she slowly gave in to both of them.
A number of editing mistakes in this one. Maybe you rushed a bit to get it out. But still a solid story. Good work. You're one of my favorite authors.
Great build up of the story but disappointed with the ending. All of the teasing with Jeff and in the end all he gets is to kiss on her ass and make out while Frank got bj and sex. Would have been nice for her to blow Jeff when he sat on chair, or she sit on his cock while frank face fucked her again.
This is nothing like your earlier work. You can't just say stuff like "there was a sexual tension between them" you have to show it. You use to do that. What happened?
Katie is a keeper.
She can make 2 men happy (3 if she stays with her boyfriend Bob).