All Comments on 'Office Wife'

Fabulous Story! When I saw you adding the daughter I worried, but you kept her in that part of his life. This story could keep going with all sorts of complications.

A perfect writing touch, very real and believable, as if the writer actually did(?) grow up in the South.

Fantastic. Loved it all the way through.

A very good tale, it and Spring Break Wife. Thanks for the tales (look forward to more).

somewhere east of Omaha

I wish there was a part 2

Talk about having your cake and eating it too! This is pure fantasy because real life is a lot messier!

Found it by accident. Plan to read some of your other stories as well.

This is like the fifth or sixth time I have read this, I love this story. I think everyone should have a Carmen.

What's going to happen when both mother and daughter are together with Jake in his Condo ?

Can he handle both of them together ?

Very well done. It drew me in and made me want to know what happens next.

Another FANTASTIC story. So we'll done, so creative, and so fun. This is another of your stories that would make a great movie!!!!! Awesome work. Thank you!!!!!!

Office wives and office husbands exist quite often in real life. It is the nature of human life. However, this was a fun fantasy

Cool story, but that weird ending.. 'don't abuse the privilege'?? Really? Doesn't fit, at all.

Loved this story the first time I read it

What a wonderful fantasy. Well done.

A follow up would have been great...

Still love it tho!

Now that's the way I like it, uhuh...uhuh!! Intelligent, believable dialog; very interesting plot; and no BTB!! Kudos!

It's a shame there's no sequel and sex with mother and daughter at once.

Wow! Never thought I would find more despicable characters than Linda & Marc in February story's but these 2 OMG so much more evil, a couple of whores who justify their abuse of the people they supposedly love because "what else could they do" it would cost us money otherwise. So many other options BUT still loved it well written, and I do love the dichotomy you establish with them all thinking they are the good guys despite the blatantly evil actions reducing their vile nature to a banality of disgusting actions. Pimping out her own daughter and thinking it was out of love, I would love to see what happens when she finds out what really happened seriously messed up but wonderful read

Nice concept and well written, although I would have liked the sex scenes to be a bit more explicit and hotter. There is a lot of potential for additional story lines here, so it's a pity the author didn't follow through on those and he seems to have left the site. I found another author has picked up this thread and so I'll read his stuff.

As usual, the comments of the Loving Wives trolls are great. It's a fantasy, so what is their complaint? "Oh, this wouldn't happen in real life", or otherwise hateful comments about vengeance. Is it only the Loving Wives trolls who can't understand the difference between fantasy and reality?

Thank you what a truly wonderful story of true affection and love Such perfection

I absolutely love this story, especially the ending where Carmen becomes Jake’s “Office Wife”. I really loved it when Jake told Carmen to take off her wedding rings while she’s at work with him.

This was a great story!!! Five stars, for sure!!! I thought Jake blew it when he started fucking Natalie. I did not think Carmen would be OK with him fucking her daughter as the same time as he fucked her. The “office wife” idea was a good one and it worked like a charm. Really unique story. I loved it!!!

Excepcional historia, no es la típica aventura de oficina, motivada por la oportunidad y/o la lujuria, ambos son buenas personas, se respetan y terminan enamorándose, el problema de Carmen es Diego, que se ve difícil acepte compartirla con Jake, quizá más fácil sería que Natalia acepte la relación de Carmen y Jake, es difícil que no sospeche, al igual que Diego. Aun hay bastante que concluir en esta historia, también estoy a favor de una continuación o por lo menos un epílogo, la historia lo amerita.

Mother and daughter. Doesn’t get better than that. Unless. Hmmm. In part two both at same time and both pregnant. Yum.

Very well written, at one point I felt like I was in the story.

Moreeeeeeee...

Quite good!!! The slow build of romance and the kinky but loving self gift to each other was refreshing, even if the premise is fantastic / unbelievable. Some minor typos - fewer than many other writers - didn't detract from enjoying the story thoroughly.

I read this story a while back and never left a comment!

5

This needs more chapters.

Love it

Interesting to see how this plays out with Natalie

5 Big Blazomg Stars. A Good writing, a Good Story, a Good Idea, and Definitely a loving wife story. Smooth move seducing a married woman even tho she never wanted to cheat. Pretty Good overall. Thanks, Buster2U

Ótima história, adorei

WOW! One of the hottest stories that I've ever read.

What a great story!

HATED IT Poor Diego

Another read of this great story. Sometimes wish there was a sequel but maybe best left as it is.

Office politics make for strange bed fellows. Still an unusual "5".

Well done. I'm wondering if there is a part 2 where he marries the daughter and both mom and daughter get pregnant from him .lol

It kept me on tenterhooks the entire story, waiting for a massive explosion that never happened.

Jake is a lucky sob, mother during the day and daughter at night.

I would rate this a one because I hated it. It is in direct opposition to how I think and was not what I expect3d However I hate even more the stupid rating system.

1) The plot is unusual, surprising and shows out of the box thinking; very well put together. That has to be at least a two.

2) A variety of characters that are clearly explained and understood. Worth are least two points.

3) It is well written. A fair person must rate this story a 5.

ok but 48 is old af

An idea for an additional chapter or epilogue:

Carman and her daughter decide to share him and he has a daytime wife and a nighttime wife.

Maybe Carmans husband goes along with it or maybe Carman quietly divorces now that her baby is out of the house

I kept waiting on it all to blow up.

All those people involved someone was going to get caught.

Maybe an Epilogue????

Well done. 5 stars

Great story line...a little strange, but in a positive way!!

Carmen was going to be Jake's, sooner or later...and Natalie was a very good "offering" on the part of Carmen and Diego (even tho' Diego was unaware of Jake and Carmen's relationship...he was unaware, wasn't he???!!!)

Sequel would be funny to read...

Five**5**Stars...Yyyaaayyy!!!!!!

Just more corporate ass.

whew, emotionally complicated... but still dang sexy!

A great story on an unusual topic! Adultery is revealed in a way that does not cause negativity, on the contrary, you feel and share their emotions.

Exciting story set up and all written really well and enjoyable and exciting to read. Great work

Great story. I would prefer if the daughter learned and accepted her mom's relationship too.

I feel sorry for Nat... I think they should work together on getting her comfortable with the idea and then be honest with her and let her choose, which will obviously be to be with both. (HINT HINT)

Then find out that Diego has been having an affair and will be happy to an amicable divorce...

WOW! EXCEPTIONAL STORY. A terrific story and an exciting read. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this amazing story plot and characters. I hope you choose to continue with additional chapters.

This is so ridiculously wrong in so many levels; but, thoroughly enjoyable if I don't think too deeply about it!

One of the better stories on Literotica. It’s erotic yet romantic.

Enjoyed the story. The sex scenes are brief but at least they are not lengthy paragraphs. The other story parts are just right, enough to fill out the story line but not too deep. Thought the husband or daughter would pick up on the scent of the soap though. Continuing the story line shouldn't take too much effort. Jake, mom and daughter before or after they get married? Dad discovering he's been cuckolded and is okay with it because his daughter "helps" him with his new reality? There is also Carmen and her husbands female relatives that could be brought into the story. Looking forward to reading more if you decide to go there.

What a shitty story.

Very very very hot

I would love a part two where he has the mom and daughter at the same time! Great read!

Nice approach, a different perspective. Refreshing.

Well done!

XYZ

I really liked the story. It made mE hard throughout and some time on edge, but never all the way over.

Pretty good story telling and loving. Will there a part-or-two??

This was a very good read. I liked your writing style. The main characters were really likeable. The story had a good flow. I also liked the element of unpredictability and I liked the way it ended. From beginning to end, 5☆.

Great story. I'm not a fan of cheating personally, like I'm adamantly against it, but you did it right in not doing the whole cuck thing and just stating 'yeah, she's married, but it's not overbearing where they fuck all the time'. 5 stars

Wow, really intense. I wanted more of the story but felt if it continued it would result in disaster. 5*s.

each sentence led to an exciting idea and built on it. Very good. Left me wanting more. Natalia gets pregnant? Carmen and Natalia and Jake on Natalia's wedding day.

Fun, fun story. Nicely written and held my attention throughout. Solid 5............

Well, that’s one way to make a story out of a common phrase. Well done!

I wouldn't have minded if the story was longer. It was a great story idea and well put togethor.

A well written and exciting story that focuses on the office wife concept. Enjoyed it immensely

agree with the other anon.. needs a rewrite this thing sucked

Wow! Talk about having your cake and eating it too.

Great story. Well thought out and written, with plenty of love, drama, angst and of course sex! I especially liked the family interplay; Mom and Dad pushing a relationship with their daughter with Mom's now 'office husband'. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Very smooth and sexy story. You gave just enough sexy descriptions without dragging it indefinitely and uselessly. Good mastering of the evolution of the story. Thx.

5*

BJ

This does need a major rewrite.

Perfect! A very erotic and pleasurable read.

Such an excellent piece of writing. I completely enjoyed it. Forget about the critics.... this story is exactly what it was intended to be .... entertainment.

I love it - the connection between Jake and Carmen is hot and special. But I can’t help but feel for Diego (and Natalie too). I was sort of hoping Carmen would have Diego spank her (perhaps for always being late) since Jake wasn’t into it. And maybe Jake does like spanking when it is Natalie. Just a thought for an avenue through. Perhaps Diego could make Carmen admit to being attracted to Jake (and gets the benefit of her lust at home) and perhaps Natalie and Jake get closer and while blowing him she gets him to admit to being deeply attracted to her mother and that it is what led to his attraction to her ( maybe they role play) 5 Stars!!!

Now now this is the kind of story which makes mee glued up on my phone.👌🏾👌🏾🌹

Wonderfull storey, please do a follow up. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought I won't like mother daughter kind of thing. But this is beautifully written that I pushed my boundaries to read it. One of a kind. Keep writing.

Absolutely 5 stars plus could add more to it.

Excellent Story

Excellent story!!!!! Congratulations! 5 stars!

I have read it multiple times and enjoyed it every time. Would love to see a sequel to it. New story in the same office or continuation of this story. It would be interesting to see if both mother and daughter are pregnant at the same time

This is my second read of this story and I liked it better the second time. It’s different and very unusual and it made me envious of Jake. I’ve done sisters and cousins but never a mother and daughter and, alas, I’m too old now. Keep up the good work.

Good story both times I have read it. The thing I like about it is the bosses are upfront and blunt about sex in office and control it and reward the girls for it in Manny ways....instead of sneaking around and trying to fool others.

Wow, a different but interesting story but how long before a divorce?

Outstanding story, your style and presentation was perfect. I love a great and sexy love story.........():\

Carmen is nothing more than an office slut and Jake has been taught to be a snake. Diego is a kept fool. The business runs a bordello as a sideline. Nothing worthwhile here.

Very nice, a little bit risky on several levels but deserves its own merits

Great story. And very interesting. Was a little turned off by the (obligatory) anal intercoursa at the end (where else but the end?) Five stars easily.

This is an amazingly original story. The taboo aspect of the affair of a young man and a mature married woman is exacerbated with three things: 1) him marrying the daughter and having the mother as a lover at the same time. 2) The fact that he is friends with the cuckhold. And 3) of course, the institutionalized sex at the workplace!!!

Talk about everything that can be called wrong and sick. LOL

In addition to the originality, it is very well written and it has a great pace to it.

Total pathetic crap

Gracefully constructed bit of layered kink

This story was excellent. Definitely 5 stars. I don't understand what those wankers in the comments below are going on about.

EXCELLENT !!!

An interesting romance story, with erotic interludes, well worth reading. This work deserves at least one more chapter, but should continue until Jake has married Natalie by which time he will have both a wife and mother in law to satisfy.

Congratulations and thank you for publishing this work.

You could write a whole new chapter writing off Diego. Would allow some interesting character development.

I agree with anonymous who posted a month ago. I gave 3* before I read any comments.

Sorry. This story is just creepy AF. I was generous with 3 stars. Natalia and Diego deserve better.

What a great story, he gets the mother (Carmen) as his Office wife during the day and the daughter (Natalia) at night and the rest of the time as his real wife. As long as Nat and Diego don't find out it is a Win -Win as I don't think either one of them would be in to sharing. This tale definitely isn't done and deserves more chapters. So MajorRewrite how about it, your readers want more! Well done 5+++stars