All Comments on 'Officer Friendly Ch. 02'

I sincerely hope that your book that you are publishing is a whole lot better than your story...

Part one wasnt' to bad, but this one sucked from the minute you began. Since when if she is in a car do they talk as if they are on instant message? It would be conversation. I am surprised the editors didn't pick it up. shame on them! I am sorry to say i will not look for future works from you, you lost my interest. Jane

I can appreciate the eroticism of such an enounter if handled right. However, I see nothing sexy about an officer behaving like a control freak, and abusing the privliages accorded to an officer of the law.

Sorry for the low ranking

1. It was great

2. who cares how she wrote them speaking I didn't want to read he stood in the car window and said" blah, blah blah,

I wanted to get to the fucking thats what PORN WRITERS DO!I read this comments and they are really stupid.

SOAKING WET

gets better and better everytime