All Comments on 'Officer Michelle Ch. 02'

Make sure you triple check your stories before you submit them, or have an editor look at them. You substituted "Cordero" for "Cordova" several times. Also its hard getting a sense of what kind of person Michelle really is . . . Her outrage at being cheated on by Cordova seems awfully hypocritical given her immediately jumping into bed with a married man, and wanting to continue that relationship even as she's getting married.