by stubborn_dreamer
The new edit looks really good! Great job, the scenes are funnier tooXD
Next time, plz leave Ginger out of the sex scenes. She really killed the mood
You, one of the few people that knows the difference between 'who' and 'whom' missed the 'then' and 'than' at teh ( ^_^*) end.
Even though I saw this a couple of months ago and was turned off by the title, I think now I am going to continue reading. I'll admit I was scared, I'm not any more.
Very well done, thank you for the contribution. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.