by stubborn_dreamer
YOUR POWER OVER FONTS HAS LEFT YOU!
UNFORMATTED TEXT ONCE AGAIN REIGNS SUPREME!
MUAHAHAHAHA!
(Also, why on earth did you think we'd WAIT to read the next chapter? Are ye daft, lass? ;) )
I love this entertaining tale and can't wait to find out what happens on Zrya's journey. Hopefully it goes well and quickly so she can get back to Kail. Love those two!
Hanto is a fucking punk and I hope he gets what he deserves. Hopefully Zyra and Kail's love will not die. I really hope they can be with each other and that his past isn't too bad.
Okay so I just sat and read everything you have posted and I really need chapter 22 like yesterday! Your writing is great, the sex hot, the story line amazing. Give me more please and thank you.
Hanto is one crazy bastard..... I hope Zyra doesnt have to away for years....
I am so happy I found this story, it's literally perfect!!! I love that Zyra is finally doing her though! Granted, she is being controlled by Caligula and Etaceh (did I spell those right?), but I have a strong feeling that she will somehow find her way out of it! There must be some type of way in that world!!! Also, I like that her relationship with her sister Kyzu isn't at the odds again, I love that she has a sister who supports her, and a lovely little niece!! I hope this is the last we see of little miss Henna, now that's how you spell thirsty bitch! Also Hanto needs to have several seats. Nobody wants him, like damn get a life, creep. I don't know about Enui and her nymph lovers, but I do hope Gharla does reunite with Vine! And I really just want Ztra and Kail to ride off into the sunset with little human/keromedio/orge babies!! That'd be so cute! But he seems to think she's never coming back! Please say she's coming back!? Please say you'll update ASAP!! (Speaking of asap, I had a dream that A$AP Rocky had his own line of Magnum Ice cream??? Or he was super endorsing it or something, strange af....)
No kill kail! Please no! I want to know her father! XD oh gosh I just love this story! I want to name my son kail. Haha but I would like to see her spark a relationship with another.. don't get me wrong. I love kail. He makes orgres sexy. But it would be amusing..what if she has a half brother? :0 or she gets deliciously tangled up with a sexy witch and what about the other human colony on mars? So much.
Literotica has become way to publicised and the most retarded stories are posted daily. I only come back toy read your stories and kalamazoo07.... loved the chapter hanto is crazy. I wonder how long Zrya will be away. I dont even know this story could end.