All Comments on 'Ogres and Ogresses Ch. 25'

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And on another note:

I have no idea who to pick for chapter 26, so I'm not going to try. (Also, I'll be honest, I don't remember most of the early characters by now. That always happens, for some reason.)

Looking forward to the next one!

I'm glad Z is exploring her options, and she was a prude ( I love her but she was).... You're awesome and I can't wait to read the next twists and turns in your story.. rock on .

I vote scallen the basilk in the next chapter in the ogres and ogress besides Fell not Caligula the jerk.

Im So In Awe ,,,,This Story Is Fab== I Am However A Kail & Zyra Fan .So .Dont Let Him Suffer 2 much Ok ..He Is A Wonderful Character ..And I Would Love If You Could Find A Way For Vine & Gharla To Reunite SomeHow -- Threw Maybe A Spell Or Him Being Able To Go To Her -- Since At The Moment She Can Not Go To Him .. Maybe Intertwine It With Helping Kail ......

Your work is fab ... and comments are a fair price for its continuation..so I Thank you ..just dont leave this story to die too soon ... its hard to find good writers.. then to become entranced in their characters only to then find it unfinished or throw aside like trash is heartbreaking especially to someone who isnt drawn to everyones work,,.

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this story is very good cant wait for chapter 26 =)

I would lov to see basilk in it and for Zyra to keep discovering her self instead of to be hurting for the ogre

I didn't vote ... so I would like to vote for her to spend an evening with the nymphs.... Hell, I would like to see her with Rell... Only because he's one of my favorite side characters .... it doesn't matter either way the story is always awesome.

I love this freaking story. I have been sad, amused and horny throughout this story!!!!! Keep it up!!!!

Hey stuborn_dreamer,

I am so thankful that you have chosen to share this story with us readers.I believe you have a wonderful gift with writing. Your writing has absolutely captivated me from the beginning. It would be a lost to the world if you ever stop writing. I am a fan for life! Anyways, I would like to see Scallen and Zara hook up. That so needs to happen. Once again, thank-you!!!

I love this! Tour doping a fantástico job. Will there be more?

Hi all!

Sorry if my message somehow indicated I was done with the series.

I am not, I intend to write much more. I have a lot of plans for the series, but I'm at the point where I can see how everything ends and I want to take us there while the vision remains. (With a few revisions from the fans of course)

Chances are we could easily get to Chapter 45. Don't worry, you will ALL know when the series is done. Working on Chapter 26 as we speak.

Love you all,

Sincerely

The Stubbornest of Dreamers.

-SD

You little minx! you keep us on edge for what feels like months waiting for the coveted update, but I must say when you deliver you really deliver. I really like the direction this story has taken the past few episodes (Kail/Hanto/Henna) had begun to become dreary but now the life in your story telling has resurfaced and by that I mean you're giving us more of Zyra. More sides to her, compleating her which is great because she was always perfect and polite but now she is more interesting she can be mean and messy and rude and vulnerable someone realistic and also medean he is kind of like a guide and protector and its cool how theyre relationship has to grow and that doesent trust him yet. But I would like to ask if you can expand the valley and bring us to different parts and also show us more characters and creatures! And the history of this world, social structure whats the deal with grey witches how does the hiarchy work who does caligula bow to, is zyra his possible daughter and does he care and what I would really like is for the unicorn to resurface and get with ginger but later on I guess! Also cheesy I know but could zyra pleeez get an awsome pet/companion something strong and usually untamable any way I will stop now! Thanks for updating so much and I will so vote for you. Your loving Fan

T.

I love it and I can relate to Zyra so much. I like the intro to new lovers. She must be able to look at herself through all angles. Keep up the awesome work.

I'm glad that Zyra is finally realizing that she has someone to trust and help her through this ordeal. I wonder what Kail has been doing all this time?

yes. shes experiencing life an whats its like to come into her sexual age. its good to explore your options, I didnt know if i liked medean in the beginning but i love him now. He's good for zyra. He's exactly what she needs with her family away.

My favorite chapter so far! I keep checking and checking for the next one.

Rell and Scallen (whats some of his back story?) are my favorite side characters, though our lovable brute is kinda a side character at the moment because of her task, but I am not having any withdraws from him because I don't want him to "leave" Zyra, now anyway... but I don't have a decision on her loyalty yet... i did love this chapter after all...

Your writing has been so good so far! Even if you edited out the "naughty" bits (but left innuendos signifying the relationships) I would still read this!

Awesome stuff, but please do keep our heroine true to her lawful nature.

She does need some restraint or she'll lose her character.

Hi guys, I sincerely apologize, but I am suffering from SERIOUS writer's block. I don't know when the following chapter will be out, but I am trying my hardest. Thank you for your support, and don't give up on me! I have some great stuff planned for chapter 26. It's going to be awesome!

Love always,

-SD

I like the fact she is experimenting more and coming into her sexuality. I love the sex/connection between her and Kail, 'But' I want to see her interactions with others. I especially want to see what happens between her and the Basilisk. He has actually been my first favorite, before Kail; it would be interesting to witness their passions together. Medean is cool though, but I'm still in favor of the other two.

My lovely Stubborn dreamer,

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I am a new reader, and found this series so captivating I couldn't stop reading! It was much to my demise as I had gotten quite aroused when I kept reading from my phone on the train.

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I do have some suggestions:

I think Zyra should ask Medean to explain the workings of the vally and some history to expand the world and get to grips with array of creatures you intent to introduce. If I were Zyra, I'd ask Medean (now that she trusts him a bit more) to teach her some magic tricks that may be useful when Caligula tries to take advantage of her, or when she gets into another predicament. Maybe the spell to allow other humans to eat food from the vally, or simple healing spells so she can tend to her friends better. Or even a spell to make her deadly silent when she walks like Kail.

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Anyway, enough of my ranting! Thank-you Thank-you for committing to this series! Especially because you do have a life beyond writing (as much as i want to deny it) :P

So I'd like to leave you with this last comment, and i quote :

More! Rawr!

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P.S. I want to see new species and allies

More hot sex please!! I like that she finally losing her prudishness. I hope Medean isn't the jealous type and doesn't mind sharing.... Maybe with a certain nymph or basilisk??

You intimated that you are/were an English Major. Your use of:adverbs and adjectives needs work; past and present tenses seem to be complete mysteries; punctuation, esp. commas are very problematic; and you frequently misuse words. Of lesser importance is your use of syntax. A good editor would be of enormous help to you.

In spite of the foregoing, you have a definite gift for storytelling. The only reason I write the foregoing is due to the "reading-flow" being interrupted.