All Comments on 'Oh Baby, Baby'

this was wonderful! I'm wet already imagining that I'm the babysitter :)

I really liked this story. It was short and sweet and very sexy. The description of the sex was great. Can't wait to read more.

was the wife watching through the window? Does she walk in?

Nice turn on. I wish something like this would happen to me.

Awesome! Keep them coming like this one.

great story. made me so hot and wet!

Love it. Perfect.

Amazing story made even more so by you saying this was only your 2nd story! I've been on this site for years and you definitely have the ability to write well. Looking forward to many more from you. Perhaps a story where the guy and girl continually get close to getting caught many times to bud up the tension? I'm sure you could do wonders with an idea like that. Maybe under the table stuff that shows reluctance and then allowance? Keep writing and we'll keep reading more from you.

Very hot, but there's no "barrier" to "shred" the first time a woman has sex.

Not bad, but the actual sex part was rushed. It took all of, what, a paragraph or two? Draw it out more next time. And careful with "it's." Its only gets an apostrophe if it's the contraction for it + is. If you mean the possessive its (the dog bit its tail), there is never an apostrophe.