All Comments on 'Oh Boy Ch. 01'

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groundhog69groundhog69about 9 years ago
good story line

waiting for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
You never told him why the first girl ran

It is implied that she was afraid of his big cock, but Janice should have had the conversation and indicate she wasn't afraid. Nice story. I will read you again.

ranec1ranec1over 4 years ago
Mean As!!

Chur m8 awsum story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
where is the next chapter?

This is really more of a romance than an erotic couplings story. It is well conceived, and beautifully written, but it needs to be completed.

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