All Comments on 'Oh Dad, Yes! Ch. 01'

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SoNaughtySoNaughtyover 6 years agoAuthor
To the ones that give a negative comment

The ones that give me a negative comment will be deleted on any story. The ones that do that must not write stories at all! And I am not a child. I am 62 years old

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 6 years ago
Very hot!

Your story drips with heavy spoonfuls of hot taboo fun!!!!

SoNaughtySoNaughtyover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Bill, you love the taboo which is really naughty and thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Could be better

Deleting people's comments because they're negative is not childish at all...

Anyhow, I can tell you're old by the way you write. Just in the last paragraph.

"He looked at me in concern..." The correct way is with concern.

Also, "...I went to college classes", we know she's of age. No need to add college or a better way to say it is "...i went to my classes in college."

Lastly, repeated and unnecessary use of exclamation marks.

Not bad, but could use improvement.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All fathers and daughters should experience such beautiful uninhibited love

JohnheroJohnheroover 6 years ago
very hot

I hope I have a daughter like this girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
education

Never thought I would get grammar lessons in a sex site

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing

I got so fucking wet reading this.

Gypsy_69Gypsy_69over 6 years ago
Please

I hope that you continue this is really good.

42154215over 6 years ago
A ring of truth?

Pure naughtiness from start to finish ...... maybe from experience , I would like to think so , it certainly got my old fella standing to attention . Thank you .!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

my dad is 63 yrs old we started our affair when I was 22 I've been his lover, best friend and anything else he's wanted for 20 yrs now and I can say this omg I love him so much the kissing my feet to cumming in me I can't ask for anything better. yes all fathers and daughter should explore each other sexually

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Daddy seduced me

When I was 20 years old my father and I went to a wedding out of town. In order to save money we got one room with two beds.

After the wedding I went back to the room to get a nap. Daddy stayed at the reception and came to the room later and was inebriated.

I heard him open the door and turned my back away from him. I closed my eyes and tried to go back to sleep.

I heard him moving around the room and then I felt him sit down on my bed.

I thought that he was getting undressed and sitting on my bed to remove his pants.

The next thing I knew I felt the bed moving and he was laying down in my bed. I could smell the alcohol on his breath as he turned towards me and put his arm around my waist.

I froze there wondering what he was going to be doing.

It didn't take long for me to find out. He moved close to me and I could feel his hard throbbing cock against my ass.

Oh no I thought to myself. Please don't do this to me.

His hand found my left breast and he began to kneed it softly and pull lightly on my nipple

I tried to turn around and tell him to stop but before I could he pushed his cock at my pussy and it slipped inside of me.

Oh god I thought to myself. My father is fucking me

Daddy don't I cried. It's me I cried. I'm your daughter.

But my protest fell on deaf ears. He didn't say anything. All he did was push his cock deep inside of me and I couldn't move. Faster and faster he was stroking his cock in and out of my vagina. I heard him groan and he slammed his cock deep inside of me and held it there.

That's when I felt his cock expand and spurt his potent seed inside of me

I was crying now uncontrollable Please daddy I cried. Don't do this to me.

But the damage had been done. His semen had coated my overies and I knew that I was ovalating so I knew that I was probably going to be pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thank you so much for sharing

Michael

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Father waited for her to turn 18 yet she was an accomplished cocksucker by then

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"How he didn't cum when I exploded was a mystery to me cause it was harder than I have ever came before cause it actually..." I stopped reading at this point BECAUSE it was about the 15th time you used "cause" instead of the proper "because"...

Once or twice using it when you are trying to sound like some uneducated redneck is one thing. But your over-use of it makes one believe the writer is truly an uneducated redneck and not worth reading.

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