by vishmech
Beyond the Taboo, this is an understanding and beautiful expression of the energy and intensity available to a mother and son whose love blossoms in tenderness and sweetness. My son and I have had that joy and I can think of nothing which has made us more humane and loving in our lives.
Please proof read your submission, it is approximately fifth grade language and spelling.
mother and son stories I've read in a while. A little proofing wouldnt go astray also. Good work.
I am not a writer, but you should make sure of your story.You have different names to character. Your discription of the events do not jive. You had mom in nightgown with bare breast then you have you taking off a bra. Plus you were already yourself biting the breasts.
one look at the author's bio and you will see that English is not the first language. If you can write as well in Hindi or Urdu or Gujerati as YOUR second language ok, otherwise just enjoy a good read and an arousing story. I for one found it arousing and exciting - my cunt is still pulsating!
more detail on how he fucked her all night; as much detail as you do about describing head if you were a woman the all night part is as colourfully illuminatingly amazing as the start
...get some COLOR into this to ..'juice it up'..have sonny hire on several BLACK ADONISs' for her to REALLY get it on with!!!...BLACK IS BIG..THICK..and LONG..just ask VANNA WHITE..she's been BLACK OWNED for over 25 years..and has her own 'ladies group'..harem for service to her BLACK MASTERS at will..at their beckon..internationally!!!..yet all live normal lives..ALL BLACK BREEDER VESSELS!!..BLACK CUM HOLDERS..as their BLACK LORDS COMMAND..KING OBAMA is their KING BLACK LORD..so look for action at the white(BLACK)house..as his beautiful wife is bi-sexual too..YOU GO GIRLS!!!..;-}}}..give it up to the BLACK GODS!!!XXXOXOXOXOXOXO!
do you read the stories or just cut and paste your highly original comments? -- UK CYNIC
The lady from Texas, on page 1 of comments, expresses what tens of thousands of mothers and sons, probably many more, get to feel every year--that there is nothing that compares with motherfucking for excitement and the sense of sexual fulfillment. Who does a son love more than his own mother? Who does a mother cherish more than her own son? At first the silly social taboo might make their coming together a little awkward and embarrassed. But soon family love smashes that anti-human taboo to bits! The son relaxes and finds the natural home for his stiff dick up between his mother's legs, his mom melts and finds the perfect stuffing for her wet twat in her darling boy's big hard prick! How much and how often can mom take her boy's big loads of creamy sperm up her cunt? Mother and son kiss deeply and smile lovingly at each other. They plan to spend many years finding out.
That last, hysterical and uninformed writer should pay a little more attention. Didn't he notice, or maybe not understand, the very first commenter, the lady who's been spreading her legs wide for her darling son and his stiff young prick, and speaks from personal experience? I also speak from experience, not my own so far (but it's gonna be soon!), but that of a couple of my close buddies. Kevin's been fucking his mom for a few months, Sean just started last week. They're both very cool, very well-balanced guys. They've fucked plenty of girls their own age, but each GLOWS when he describes the feeling of snuggling his dick up his own mother's cunt. It's like his mom's cunt's making LOVE to her son's big prick, and when Kev and Sean blow their balls up their mommy's twat, she just explodes with love and joy for her manly young motherfucker creaming where a boy's cream is supposed to go.
This is an excellent story, despite the niggling nay-sayers. Some of the commenters get it right. There's a reason why motherfucking is becoming more and more popular all the time. First of all, the convenience, especially if mother and son live together. Second, the close connection between a mother and her male child, the closest human connection there is. Then there's the fact that her boy's got the hardest dick a mother will ever find, and a pair of hot young balls that just never quit. The boy's had a big hard on for his mom ever since he started getting hard ons. Nothing can ever match a mother's joy when she's getting fucked by her own son, or a son's pride in blowing his young balls up his own mother's twat---his own birth canal!
You need to spend time on conversational American - - not just English. Also, work on your plurals/singulars. I read only the first two sentences and knew you were probably Indian (I haven't confirmed it yet). So, get out of formalities, and get into everyday life. By the way, nobody works IN the farm, they work ON the farm.
Is Tom's dad dead, or did he run off? It doesn't matter I guess, Tom fills his mom better than his dad did anyway.
First her nipple was showing from her nightgown, he unhooked her bra, then she dropped her robe and was naked, then she lifted and he pulled off the nightgown. Keep your story straight. Good story otherwise.
Here I was finally fucking my mom, it almost didn't seem real. It felt real as I watched my cock moving back and forth inside her pussy. Then I watched her tits bouncing noticing how much her hard nipples were sticking out. Then I looked at my mom's face. Her eyes were closed, he mouth was open as she began moaning. "Harder Tom, fuck me harder, slam that cock into my pussy,," my mom exclaimed! "Oh god mom, your pussy feels so good, I love fucking it," I shouted in return!
Too many inconsistencies....sucked her erect nipples, then unclasped her bra...
Get a proofreader.
Some acknowledgement of the 'taboo' of the whole thing of mother & son wasn't even mentioned.
There was no embarrassing moment of realizing the line they were crossing with each other.
Hot read but not 5 stars...
I gave this 4 stars.