by lesbiaN7ncest
Although I haven't read this chapter fully (nor any of the previous installments), I did see that you know how to write well.
I can't speak for the sex-scenes though, since they do nothing for me. I never was big on the Celebrity / Fanfic thing. And, having played the trilogy myself, I just cannot bring myself to think of these characters as sexual beings. The whole idea of lesbian relationships and incest (which I usually find a huge turn-on) simply doesn't work for me within that context.
However that shouldn't discourage you from continuing your series. Seeing the amount of chapters and the frequency of your publishing, you obviously enjoy writing these fantasies. And after all, that's all that really matters!
Best regards,
Koriander
I remember when this was first posted on the mass effect kink-meme.....and to find it on here tonight was an unexpected treat....not sure how many times over the past few years I've gotten myself off to this Fic...I love it! ~Tinytut83