by coaster2
Good tale. He still is fairly insecure about why he is was chosen, but, the author has convinced me that Astrid would never hurt him..... At times I have a problem with submissives, especially when the yield on everything and you can not be certain whether there is a real person under there. Still a fine story, which iniated a nice writing career. In fact I feel that the author could sell this series to a publisher after more polishing...
An interesting and unexpected twist. I could be wrong, but I suspect even more twists in this tale. Excellent story.
I loved reading this chapter, especially after those comments that all the HATERS left on the the last chapter. They wanted conflict? Well they got it LOL
I don't get all the tears, crying, and regurgitation by Rick. He seems to be something of a wimp who lacks intestinal fortitude.
Good, maybe a little clichéd at times but a great change of emphasis and a differdnt storyline with some bite, anxiety and foreboding.